Friday, 28 July 2017

Digging deeper in to my sentence.




WALT : Dig deeper and use words that are more interesting in our writing.
It was hard to find describing words. First we started with an easy sentence and made that more     interesting by giving it nouns and adjective . next time I might do more sentence.



   

Wednesday, 26 July 2017

WALT explore shapes the tessllate

up the garden path

WALT visualise what we are reading

Title: reading responses
journal: poi
SJ NOV,2014.l2


Maia didn't like her poi. It was lopsided and the taura was loose, one of huka huka fallen of. Maia found a hole in her poi and she made the hole bigger. The teacher stood in the hall watching her you need to make good choices.  The next day the teacher had red and blue wool ready for Maia. Then the next day Maia help miss Taiapa make sixty-five pois  for the festival in two weeks.  The next day maia got to go to the festival with the  Kapa haka team.The Kapa haka girls spun there pois and Maia got the prize for best pois.

Monday, 3 July 2017

WALT find better synonyms to make our writing more interesting.


My Word Bank
WALT find better synonyms to make our writing more interesting

  • Make a copy in your writing folder.
  • Rename it.

Verb from the poem
Synonym for that verb
creeping
crawling
                      The spider is crawling.                                                   
creeping
slide
                                     A snail slides.                                   
creeping
Squirming    
A spider squirming.
creeping
wriggle
Worms wriggle.
creeping
slither,
The toy  slither.
big
large
My dad is large.
black
dark
At night it is dark.